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kopakanuvafan20
2009-11-08 . chapter 19
I liked your take on the second task of the tourment.
crossxavier
2009-11-07 . chapter 24
Absolutely brilliant work. One of the most interesting works I've read. It drew me into to the story right at the beginning and didn't let go until I finished reading it all the way through. The ways you altered the story were strokes of genius (and in my opinion blew the original work away by a wide margin). The characters were just so well done I would be typing forever describing how each was magnificently done. You made sure that each had their flaws which made them much more human and easy to identify with. Hat by far has to be my favorite character ever. I just love the sharp wit and humor that fill pretty much every scene it is in. I swear that I was laughing at just about every time Hat would have a battle of wits with someone. Not to mention the creativity behind Hat's ingenious insults and other disparaging remarks. Now another remarkable achievement I feel I have to mention is the relationship between HJ and Fleur. Most authors would never have them so at odds of each other at first; most authors wouldn't be able to hold off their budding romance for close to three quarters of the story; and most authors wouldn't let them have any problems with either her family or between the two. Thankfully you are not most authors and dared to construct something that is so different from the norm that we normally read and kept it from becoming too far fetched or too focused on one particular aspect of the story. You have written a simply amazing story and now I must take a look at your other stories while I eagerly await the sequel you have planned. I am glad to see that you have released your own novel and wish you well in your endeavors.
Dreylin
2009-11-06 . chapter 24
This is flat out my favorite of all the Harry Potter stories I've read, including those sitting on the shelf behind me. This wasn't the first time I read it, and it won't be the last. I hope you enjoy writing these, because I hope to be reading your work for a long time to come.
graypheonix
2009-11-06 . chapter 24
Heh, a fun read so far, though with it's own tale of woe associated with it. Still, losing Lupin is terrible, but a sad truth to life in wartime. Definitely worth reading though, and the story so far has been a fun and interesting one. Continue to update your other stories, and good luck on publishing oyur own works. Ja ne.
graypheonix
2009-11-06 . chapter 23
Hm, Humiliation and death I think will be themes in the conclusion, though why did you wait to post a finale? It seems like this story is finished already (and quite well done at that) but is unfinished otherwise (like a preview for the sequel story). Either way, it has been a fun ride so far, and it is something I look forward to reading more of. Update again soon, will ya? Ja ne.
graypheonix
2009-11-06 . chapter 22
Hehehe, victory! And hey, Fleur is fun as hell. Still, this has made for some rather interesting events, now if only Hermoine gets her occulmancy down, then the real fun can continue, hehehe. Continue to update, ja ne.
graypheonix
2009-11-06 . chapter 21
Hehehe, an amusing act of destruction, a lost ship and an instructor, not to mention getting a fairly pretty witch to start moving on her own (hey, Millicent is sorta pretty, in the sense of doing a little working out would do wonders for her, heh. Still, I do love the superfly comment, and it seems to be moving this story towards its conclusion. Update again soon, neh? Ja ne.
graypheonix
2009-11-06 . chapter 19
Hehehe, amusing as ever. Heh. Continue to update, ja ne.
graypheonix
2009-11-05 . chapter 18
Hm, interesting. Continue to update, ja ne.
graypheonix
2009-11-05 . chapter 17
Lol, ruby tuesday indeed, heh. Definitely shows the reality of the tournament though, and hopefully Aimee pulls through, she's a good kid, guess I'll find out in the next few chapters. Still, continue to update, will ya? Ja ne.
graypheonix
2009-11-05 . chapter 16
Reap the whirlwind, and dance the jig, know the world and let it spin. A world around us, let loose its din, a fascination to its wind.

Another tale, another story, and a fun evening. Continue to update, ja ne.
graypheonix
2009-11-05 . chapter 15
Indeed, those privacy wards are a ** and a half, makes me wonder how severus knew about the fly on teh wall trick, learned from a girl he passed the night with as Sirius? Heh. As for the rest, why go for sneaking through when you can just blow on through it like a battering ram or a hurricane? Heh. Continue to update, ja ne.
graypheonix
2009-11-05 . chapter 14
Nice right double jab, an unexpected pattern shift always throws off other people's game, and it looks pretty impressive to boot. Plus, that's one of the better encounters with Dementors Ive read, without asspulls like "A patronus can destroy them" or some such **. Still, a fun ride this has been so far, and will continue to be. Update again soon, ja ne.
graypheonix
2009-11-05 . chapter 13
Hm, time for a wandless patronus, eh potter? Still, an interesting notch on the wand, and a new generation starts its tally, should be most interesting. Heh, especially since Draco is such a pansy, maybe some passing comment on how the little boy got onto the quiditch team in the first place? Heh. Continue to update, ja ne.
graypheonix
2009-11-05 . chapter 12
Hm, interesting duels, so they've continued, and with a fair number of spells. Heh. Definitely a fun part to read, and probably pretty fun to write to boot, heh. Continue to update, ja ne.
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