 Lanen 7/4/01 . chapter 1This fic actually sparked a "what-if" into my head. If Nuriko *had* saved his strength and not moved the boulder, Mitsukake would have made it in time to heal him, and *then* Nuriko could have moved the boulder, ne? BUT Nuriko, being the guy he is, didn't think of this at the time, and put others before himself... which is why we all adore him! ... Got off topic there, ne? Well, great job! Very touching! I loved it! |