Sevvy! Great job with Snape's inner thoughts (he isn't an easy character to illustrate). So much lovely angst. ^_^ Nice job.

Lovely and poetic.

This is very sweet.
Thank you for sharing.

Oh, this is lovely, Paladar. I'm off now to see if you've written anything else, for this is the first of yours I've read. If there is more, I look forward to reading it. If there is not-get busy! You need to write more immediately, for you have a great gift. Thank you for sharing that gift with us, your readers.

Sincerely,
Countrymouse

Beautiful story! Snape seemed so tender (which is a good thing every now and then) and I adore SS/HG pairings! Excellent work!

i love it!
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Interesting.

Beautifully written. Every sentence seemed to fit into the next.. It was such a nice flow.

Great job!