This was a well-written story, and you obviously watch the show, since everyone was in character! it read like a real storyline. Cool!

I really enjoyed this story. Good job:)

Great story! :)

A reviewer named Ami speaks highly of your work, SparksJSH. I found this piece interesting, and appreciated that you have a good command of English grammar and that you separated your dialogue into one paragraph for each speaker, which not all writers of fan fiction do. I would have enjoyed more narrative to go along with the dialogue (describing the scenes in which the action of your story takes place, for example), along with more description of what was going on in the characters’ heads. This was a good effort, though, and I hope you continue to write.

Wow. I read almost all of your 7th Heaven fics, and they are awsome. You are one of the best writers I have read! You should continue writing! Never stop!

egbkid -Canada

lol good...i think the title is funny nd the characters are all very...like themselves...good job

Wow, another great story! You are very good at this! WONDERFUL!

great story! I'm allergic to perfme, and it really sucks. When I first get on the bus I always feel like i'm about to pass out! Anyways, great story!

This was good. Wow... you must really have it in for Lucy! *grin* SEW/Lady S

I don't care if that was an episode or not, cuz' that was good!

that was good...the plot was so 7th heaven-ish...i could really see that as an episode...good job!

wow. that was a good story. i realy liked it. you have talent

I just have a suggestion how about doing a Dukes of Hazzard/7th Heaven Crossover fanfic story? I Have an idea how about somebody is selling this new spray that is supposed to help you in losing weight and Luke Duke smells it and insted of making him louse weight is makes him shrink. He keeps on Shrinking until he is mini Luke.

that story was really good. you should become a professional. :-

All your stories are really good and I can't wait for the next one! I just have two things to say though. One, is Matt's girlfriend is Shawna, not Shana, and two I like how you mention Lucy alot because she is my favorite character in the whole show. You should do something crazy, like have her get pregnant after someone slips her the daterape drug. You could probably make that into a great story!