i love this story dearly EXCEPT for the last sentence the last sentence i loath and it makes me second guess my faving this because as much a i love a good Kyoumaki fluff i love Twincest too so i imagine the last thing to not be there and i'd have the story continue to hav Hikaru seduce Kaoru into telling him what he saw leaving Haruhi to eventually be with Mori because if Mori doesn't love herthan she'll have to be with an OC and i hate OC's ut you probably don't want to hear me whine about what i don't like but this is my true opinion and i think even if it's not entirely supportive it gives you an idea of what some readers want unlike some airhead giving only an "i loved it" or a "good story" well i hope this hasn't got you mad and if it has i'm sorry but thats what i think

8D Instant fave! Thanks for posting~

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MOAR. Need. Moar. TamaKyou.

Uh, Ouran roleplay? Kayplz? @__@

I LOVE this. xD This was amazing. Both your Kyouya and your Tamaki are MARVELOUS. Spot-on with the characters!!

this was cutte!!

...this is probably one of my favorite stories of this couple. AWESOME JOB! =^.^=

my goodness!! i just read trapped and then i read this. i really think i like our writing. and this story was great. it didnt have all the sex scenes but it still has that vibe to it. its great. keep writing stories please!

Sweet! Loved it! *though I wish Kaoru would realize that Hikaru's really into him! * *lol* ^_^

I think I blushed through more than halkf of this... YAY! GO YAOI FLUFF!

Awe!. So cuute ^.^ That's all I can say to be honest.. because it was so adorable. good job!! =]

Buahahaha! What a unique idea! I never thought to make Kyoya ticklish! That was really great-thanks for writing it! Lots of fun to read.

Ha! I hate being tickled! So cute! So, it seems(and I could be wrong) that Tamaki's dominant?

cute.

I actually had read your story before - I thought I'd reviewed, but maybe I forgot.

I quite liked it! It does seem like something Tamaki would do. However, if I may lend some concrit, you made a few punctuation mistakes, such as:

“Ah, mon ami” Tamaki wrapped (etc.)... where there should be a period after 'ami'. Also, there is this, which is similar:

“Kyouya.” Tamaki said (etc.) ... where you cannot start a new sentence to say "he/she said". It should be a comma instead of a period.

My suggestion is that you get a beta. I would be happy to edit if you like.

Overall, though, I really liked it! Keep it up.

Also, I should have that story for you by tomorrow (Wednesday), or, at the latest, Thursday. I have to transfer it from my laptop to my main computer but can't seem to find my memory stick... and if I email it to myself the formatting will be changed.

I like this one-shot; it really brings out Tamaki's character. You should do more of these

Teehee...Very erotic...With a sweet ending. ^-^