I'm madly in love with this story and would love to see it continued in some way.

That was, by far, the BEST fic I've ever read. Write a book sometime...oh, man that was good.

wow, again, i don't even like emma, but i love the way you write. its so...i don't know, dramatic? that doesn't seem like the right word. but great job, very thought provoking. ok, off to read more!

! Veddy veddy goot! It certainly is a different take on Emma. Excellent writing. He he.

I like this! it's very well written, and an interesting theory on why Emma's powers are being changed. :) Rachel

Wow. That's all I can say. This is a really stunning peice with a unique twist on a character you don't see much. The "new" version of the White Queen really hasn't been seen yet but it will be interesting to see how she fits with your version. I'd love to see more of this.