I'm with ashatanii on this. Great story but doesn't feel like the end.

I know i'm acting like a spoiled kid but I want more!

Hey, Mom, great story. I loved the fact that Dean Bostic was the rescuer. When do we get to see how they handle work with their injuries? I bet it could be funny and maybe give both of them a bit of appreciation for Jim.

Fin? This is the end of the story? It sounds like a great beginning but doesn't cut it as an end. I thought the section as they came to in the broken car were excellent, really conveyed the exhaustion and the confusion that comes with being knocked out. The image of Tom's shoes flying off was very poignant. Nice ew factor out of Marty's wrist. Loved that he still had a sense of humor but would have liked to hear it move on from there as Marty's hurt pretty bad and Dean is a professional and I suspect would follow the dig up with some actual compassion and help. I was suprised that Fisk was angry only and not a mix of angry and relieved or thankful that they were ok. Please Mom, canI have some more?

Hey, this was really good! Poor guys have to not only have pain from the accident but a pain in another spot when they get back to work! Great job!

Hey, a story with a neat twist. Great writing as usual.
Fisk could cut them a bit more slack though. He's lucky
they're not dead!

This could be a fun series with some interesting replacements for Tom and Marty while they're out of commission, no?

Anyway, you made me smile, like always. I especially liked the "Super Jim" part. Nice to know that even though Marty is playing a little more nicely on the outside, he's still Marty.

I love the fathers theme you've had going on for the past few stories, too. Great work, as usual!