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AATC-86
2007-05-07 . chapter 15
Good, very good. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D
AATC-86
2007-05-07 . chapter 12
What's Gunray up to? That sneaky old whiner. :P Trying to seduce River with jewelry, eh?

You've portraied Dooku spot on. He's a jerk, we all know it. ^^

I actually like the romantic scenes between River and Grievous. And I'm no big fan of such scenes, but these are good!

Obi-Wan's mission, his reactions...priceless! ^^

Your sis have only said good things about me, I hope. ;)
AATC-86
2007-05-07 . chapter 4
I really like your story so far and will continue to read it.

Just a few typos, otherwise it's excellent. :)
Thomas Drovin
2007-04-03 . chapter 15
Well, well, well! Looks like Kenobi's mission is NOT going to work! River isn't fooled by him, is it any wonder why Grievious was so pleased with her rejecting Kenobi? Poor Grievious really misses River, oh for the days when he was still flesh and blood! I look forward to your next chapter when you get around to it. Later!
Thomas Drovin
2007-03-27 . chapter 14
Aw! Poor Grievous, he really mises River! Maybe Ezzy will break him out of his depression, update soon so I can see how this 'threpy' will work!
Thomas Drovin
2007-03-27 . chapter 13
So...River and Obi-wan meet! Let's see how this little meeting will go huh? Update soon!
Thomas Drovin
2007-03-25 . chapter 12
Oh boy! Kenobi has been given an IMPOSSIBLE task here! After what happened to her last time I doubt River will fall for Kenobi's charms, in fact she might kill him! And if she does then Grievous will kill him for trying to steal his wife!

Either way it's a no win situation here for Kenobi, update soon!
Thomas Drovin
2007-03-24 . chapter 11
Oh nice! River's with the Ewoks, I sure hope Grievous dosen't turn up and attacks them! Update soon!
Thomas Drovin
2007-03-24 . chapter 10
Aw! What a sweet chapter! What does the next one hold? I'll check it out! Next!
Thomas Drovin
2007-03-20 . chapter 9
Aww! That was a sweet chapter! I'll bet it makes Grievous wish he was still a proper guy and not a cyborg huh? Update soon!
Thomas Drovin
2007-03-20 . chapter 8
Wow! Sounds like Ezzy, River and Grievous are really making an effort here! I can't wait to see their reaction to each other when they all meet! Update soon!
Thomas Drovin
2007-03-17 . chapter 7
Aw! Grievous really DOES care for River, as that little chapter proves. I can't wait to see how he'll react to her at that banquet! Update soon!
Thomas Drovin
2007-03-16 . chapter 6
Man that was a quick update! I see that River knows Dooku's follower Asajj Ventress. After reading this chapter I can see that this will lead to friction from time to time. Good work as always, update soon!
Thomas Drovin
2007-03-15 . chapter 5
Well Grievous, River and Ezzy really make an interesting trio don't they? They're like the family that Grievous always wanted, I have a feeling that the banquet will be very special to all of them. Update again soon.
Thomas Drovin
2007-03-15 . chapter 4
Welcome back! I'm flattered that you were thinking of me when you decided to finish this wonderful story. I see that you have picke up another follower too! Anyway, I look forward to this banquet River, Grievous and Ezzy will be attending. I'll read on to find out.
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