 AATC-86 2007-05-07 . chapter 15Good, very good. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D |
 AATC-86 2007-05-07 . chapter 12What's Gunray up to? That sneaky old whiner. :P Trying to seduce River with jewelry, eh?
You've portraied Dooku spot on. He's a jerk, we all know it. ^^
I actually like the romantic scenes between River and Grievous. And I'm no big fan of such scenes, but these are good!
Obi-Wan's mission, his reactions...priceless! ^^
Your sis have only said good things about me, I hope. ;) |
 AATC-86 2007-05-07 . chapter 4I really like your story so far and will continue to read it.
Just a few typos, otherwise it's excellent. :) |
 Thomas Drovin 2007-04-03 . chapter 15Well, well, well! Looks like Kenobi's mission is NOT going to work! River isn't fooled by him, is it any wonder why Grievious was so pleased with her rejecting Kenobi? Poor Grievious really misses River, oh for the days when he was still flesh and blood! I look forward to your next chapter when you get around to it. Later! |
 Thomas Drovin 2007-03-27 . chapter 14Aw! Poor Grievous, he really mises River! Maybe Ezzy will break him out of his depression, update soon so I can see how this 'threpy' will work! |
 Thomas Drovin 2007-03-27 . chapter 13So...River and Obi-wan meet! Let's see how this little meeting will go huh? Update soon! |
 Thomas Drovin 2007-03-25 . chapter 12Oh boy! Kenobi has been given an IMPOSSIBLE task here! After what happened to her last time I doubt River will fall for Kenobi's charms, in fact she might kill him! And if she does then Grievous will kill him for trying to steal his wife!
Either way it's a no win situation here for Kenobi, update soon! |
 Thomas Drovin 2007-03-24 . chapter 11Oh nice! River's with the Ewoks, I sure hope Grievous dosen't turn up and attacks them! Update soon! |
 Thomas Drovin 2007-03-24 . chapter 10Aw! What a sweet chapter! What does the next one hold? I'll check it out! Next! |
 Thomas Drovin 2007-03-20 . chapter 9Aww! That was a sweet chapter! I'll bet it makes Grievous wish he was still a proper guy and not a cyborg huh? Update soon! |
 Thomas Drovin 2007-03-20 . chapter 8Wow! Sounds like Ezzy, River and Grievous are really making an effort here! I can't wait to see their reaction to each other when they all meet! Update soon! |
 Thomas Drovin 2007-03-17 . chapter 7Aw! Grievous really DOES care for River, as that little chapter proves. I can't wait to see how he'll react to her at that banquet! Update soon! |
 Thomas Drovin 2007-03-16 . chapter 6Man that was a quick update! I see that River knows Dooku's follower Asajj Ventress. After reading this chapter I can see that this will lead to friction from time to time. Good work as always, update soon! |
 Thomas Drovin 2007-03-15 . chapter 5Well Grievous, River and Ezzy really make an interesting trio don't they? They're like the family that Grievous always wanted, I have a feeling that the banquet will be very special to all of them. Update again soon. |
 Thomas Drovin 2007-03-15 . chapter 4Welcome back! I'm flattered that you were thinking of me when you decided to finish this wonderful story. I see that you have picke up another follower too! Anyway, I look forward to this banquet River, Grievous and Ezzy will be attending. I'll read on to find out. |