Really good job, so cute! Of course, the last line is so old XD.

That was adorable!

Aahhh! *Squeals* I think all the yaoi fangirls, esp. the Puzzleshipping/Blindshipping ones, were having a ball when you wrote the wake-up scene *grins* Nice job! I notice you still refer to Atem as "spirit," so I'm not sure whether you mean "former" spirit or not, but it doesn't matter...

PUZZLESHIPPING 4EVER!

Great job!

Awwwwww it's so cute how atem (srry Im still not use to that name, it always changes the way I see yami. When I here atem, I think of a pharoh... When I here yami I think of a night witha duel disk hehe) cares for yugi so much!

how does the worst pickup line in the world sound good coming from Atem! damn that guy is good!

Bloody fluff

AW! Now that was cute! You should to a sequel to this one! It's so cute!

Lmao! what a cheesy pick up line! I'd be like "I may love you to death but that line was the worst!" Then I'd laugh about it. :] Awesome job. It was so cute! _

Carmella

*squeals* That was super KAWAII! I loved it. Made me wanna say aww and go bonkers. Dunno what the bonkers part it about but it made me really happy!

I love the last line of the fic. Cute! XD

You just gotta love corny pick-up lines! Even when the realtionship starts to get serious! _

DL: AW! That was so cute and sweet!

Despire: *represses a 'that was so cute' sigh* That was... good.

DL: Even you have to admit that was cute!

Despire: NEVER! I don't know the meaning of the word. *goes off to corner and sighs* That was the sweetest thing in the world.

DL: Hee hee. I knew she'd admit it.

This was so sweet. It is how it should have ended. Good story.