I really enjoyed this! I'd love for there to be sequel, but if this is one in which you have lost interest, then oh well. Good luck with your future and present writing endeavors!

Wow this was really awesome and a really well written story, I love the idea. I really hope you decide to finish it one day but I do understand how it feels to lose interest in writing something and how hard it is to try and finish it...trust me I have given up many a story for those reasons. Anyway you have a lot of talent and good luck on that Novel ^_^

I would really like to read the sequel to this

I hold true to my earlier critique--the pace is much too quick for my taste.

I eagerly await (and shall immediately search for) your next installment.

I LOVE how much Adam and Barbara are like family to Lydia. I've always loved that about the end of the movie. Props for retaining that sense, and even amplifying it.

Oh, and the zipper? Lovely touch. Very nice. Perfect comedic element.

Reality check, though--since when does Lydia call Delia 'Mom'?

Also, JEEZ. This story would be SO much more fantastic if you took the time to move a bit more gradually. Purely my opinion of course, but what about that dream? Where the bloody hell did that come from? Sorry if you end up explaining this later, but man--that was seriously outta nowhere. Not unwanted, (and VERY well-written) but completely contrived.

Wow, that was interesting. I finally found something I don't like about this fic (which is actually commine in LxBJ fics, so no major worries), which was quickly matched by an explanation for earlier actions that I think would be better placed in the previous chapter.

What I don't like: BJ gets soft WAY too quick. If you're going to change his personality so quick (he IS a self-proclaimed **, remember?), give us some reasoning, eh?

What I did like: Lyds' reasoning for forgiving him. She forgave him long ago, you say? That is totally believable, but would have made accepting her verbal release of BJ a lot more understandable if you'd put that into some kind of mental consideration before she did it.

Them's my two cents.

"Ghosts exist?"

"Your ring is talking to me!"

Lovin' it thus far--so glad you kept him in shackles when she unlatched him. I guess the only thing that'll really let him out is her forgiveness, eh? That makes things deliciously interesting.

Just got back from a positively horrendous BJ fanfic. This one promises to be INFINETLY more interesting.

*reads on*

Cool chapter, I like how you describe Juno so well. Looks like the situation is a bit murkier than Betelgeuse or Lydia anticipated. Hope to read Liberation soon!

cool chapter keep it up!

Very cool...but ..why are you making another story? You could just add more chapters! Eh..ah well, whatever floats your noat babes.

Argh, more suspense! Lydia's cute in this =D! Even Juno can't deny BJ's hotness in your fic either, >=D! Huzzah! I can't wait for the next one, I hope they figure something out! *hug*

Great chapter! I'm glad you're doin a sequel. You're puttin a lotta thought into this. I'm glad, usually people just stick in a quick, easy solution. I guess since you're bein creative I can wait awhile for more...ya know today's random act of kindness an all.

Thank you for the update! I can't wait for the sequel, and I will refrain from harassing you (although I was driving my husband nuts with withdrawal). I like how you introduced Judge Mental from the cartoon into the story as well... It makes me wonder if we'll see a nod towards the pilot, "Critter Sitters".

Anyway, great job as always!
~Mana :)