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Okay I get it!...i think...?

Yes I read your explaination for this piece and it is quite interesting - but maybe re-format the lines? Paragraphs and seperating the dialog from the details, that would let readers search for the patterns for themselves within the piece and understand what exactly you did. - just do some clean up.

Though it definately has its humor in this concept, it's not exactly doing its thing when placed under 'story'. To make similar gestures in an actual story though could go a long way!

(o_0)WTF!? I guess this is the program Abdul Alhazred used when he wrote the Necronomicon... Seriously, I don't think anyone could read the whole chapter without losing their sanity.

Still, it's ubercool in all it's glorious madness, though I seriously hope you never smoke enough to make you repeat this fic (^_^).

Ja ne!*Staggers away to look at the pretty lights*

I think you've discovered how some of the fics on this site are 'written'...

K, I admit I just skimmed through, but this is indeed an interesting program you used (if only it knew to double space.)