 kasoy 2008-04-09 . chapter 1hahaha this one is so so good ^_^
i love you for doing this., and please make some more! :] |
 LouEthelip 2007-11-04 . chapter 1I liked this story very much Thought the premise was exciting and the outcome most satisfying. |
 Baron Hausenpheffer 2007-04-08 . chapter 1Hmm... interesting idea. I don't really think this is the case, either, but it does make for an interesting short fic. I think Ataru built up some immunity to electricity over the course of the series, but this takes it to a new level! Anyway, nice work overall. It's always good to see people keeping the UY section alive. :) |
 Midnight Star3 2007-02-17 . chapter 1Cute little story! If you have seen the 3rd UY movie, one of the main characters in the movie was their Great Grandson. So they do have children in the future. Also Lum's mom has the same powers Lum has but her father doesn't. They had a normal realtionship as well. Like Lum she shocks her husband when he makes her angry. |
 Damien 2007-02-13 . chapter 1You know, I was thinking of writing something similiar and may yet write it. But in my story, Ataru body just naturally over time gets used to the shocks. Ataru happy that now he is immune and declare so to Lum and doesn't quite understand why she is even happier about that than he is.
Nice story. |