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| JustCallMeMarly 2008-01-01 ch 5,  | abuseThis is a great story so far and I can't wait to read the rest of it. I just wanted to note that there was a bit of repetition in this section. I'm not entirely sure where you wanted them but the first two paragraphs are repeated again about 10 or so paragraphs down. You might want to edit those out to avoid confusion... But otherwise, absolutely great story. I'm off to finish the rest of it now... :) |
| SuperKelli15 2007-04-01 ch 10, | abuseI like how you wrote it.. It was wrote extremely good.. |
| Duff89 2007-03-04 ch 9, | abuseGreat fic! I love how you keep flashing back to various points in Jacks life - please update it soon! |
| JACKAUDREY4EVER 2007-02-12 ch 7, anon. | abusewow! best fanfict ever please update, youre really great ! |
| AgentRez 2007-02-11 ch 7, | abuseWow this is great stuff...can't wait until Jack wakes up and he and Audrey get to talk...please write more soon! |