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Reviews For: The Ending Is Inevitable

Magic Kaito
2007-12-07
ch 1,
abuseWow. Just wow. I had noticed that Mytho wasn't aging, but the whole concept of him just not aging at all is great. And I've actually thought about Ahiru's lifespan, too. But yeah, that was amazing. All I can really say.
Mikure
2007-11-28
ch 1,
abuseAlways will remain as one of my favorites!
akaiihana
2007-09-22
ch 1,
abusethat hurt so much :( but that was so beautiful.
Qem
2007-05-07
ch 1,
abuseWow. Just wow.

Such a fascinating look at fairy tales and what could happen after.

This is really amazing.
Azaz the Unabridged
2007-03-21
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was gorgeous. So much love!
LunaSphere
2007-02-24
ch 1,
abuseWhile I certainly don't want to imagine that things end this way, if they were to, this story is exactly how it would be.

I apologize for that rather convoluted sentiment. In short, I was really impressed by your story.
Adi88
2007-02-23
ch 1,
abuse[Uh… okay, first of all, let me say that I love that ending. I have kept true to my word, not read story yet, but that is… is that really how it ENDS? ’Cause, if so, this series just earned a helluva lot more by way of respect.]

Oh. And… well. For all the good it did, not reading the story before, because I didn’t write a single thing while reading. That was absolutely creepy. I don’t… wow. That is so haunting and, above all, horribly sad and gripping. Very gripping…

"Every story has a happy ending - you just have to know when you stop telling. Because if you keep going long enough, every story ends in death.” - Paraphrased as best I remember from Sandman’s Preludes and Nocturnes. I have honestly never seen the sentiment captured so well, so concisely, and so utterly sympathetically as you managed here. Ever. Even in Sandman. And I’m so horrified that I’ve allowed myself to even think that that I’m going to stop now. But it’s true.
Archangel Rhapsody
2007-02-16
ch 1,
abuseAh it is so bitter sweet.
Astrobright68
2007-02-12
ch 1,
abuseso sorrowful and beautiful and true. this is fantastic and it made me cry. i never even conceived that mytho wouldn't continue to age after he went back to being the prince. this is definitely a favorite story. so bittersweet. happy endings don't last forever, i guess. i love how you said his heart died with her and fakir's description of coping with ahiru's death.
-x-Taylor-x-
2007-02-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseSniffle...that's so sad...
Ducklin
2007-02-11
ch 1,
abuseI can,t belive you made me cry. The story was great!
Mangaka-chan
2007-02-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, that was depressing; but in a very good way. It left a bitter sweet feeling after I read it, and I suppose at least part of the "happy ending" did come true, if only for a short while in their lives.
Katia-chan
2007-02-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseWaah...damn you. You shouldn't be able to make me all weepy this easily. It's not nice.

This is beautiful though, so full of emotion and pain and...waah. Everything's so real and palpable, and it's so wonderful and tear inducing...you're an evil genius, that's what this has to be.

Now, if you'll excuse me, I believe I have an appointment with a box of tissues and a boat.

Wonderful story!

TTFN

Katia-chan
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