awesome

Can you please update more.

This was such a cute chapter.

Liking where this story is going. No wonder why its such a big hit. Come back and finish it time soon.

Animalistic thing probably good for those s& m weirdos...

Yes! Sorry! I couldn't wait for the suspence(?)! Sorry, I'm not making much sence(?)am I? (Scratches back of head sheepishly.) Anyway, I just wanted to say thank you and I can't wait for a update! No pressure, though! Anyway, thanks again and ciao, my lovlies! Ciao!

Yep, that's right ladies and gentleman. A original. The-tottaly-not-jealuos-Sasuke-Uchiha!

Yay! When's Naruto going to go into heat?! I can't wait to see what happens! (Squeals.) Sorry, please forgive her. She's -she's. Well. She's she. 'Nuff said. Anyway, thank you so much and I can't wait to read the next chapter! My Mom took us to the dentist's office today. Whhoooawww! I got my last block off of school. And, now my little brother(Itachi-kun!)is drawing on my foot. Alll well, I'm to lazy to stop something that doesn't bother or pain me. I'm pissed off at my mom, though. Sorry y'all gotta be my relieve from boredom. (Sheepishly rubs back of head.) Now we're waiting in front of KFC. My mom told me earlier that she could tell by email when we were somewhere we weren't supposed to be. (Thinks back to all the secret yaoi videos,porn videos, yaoi pics, and just gerneral pervertness I've read in the past. Face struggles between grining proudly/pervertedly and going O-O and going well, shit. There went that solution to teenage hormones. Shruggs shoulders. Alll,well.) Anyway, we finally got ze KFC chicken! Now I can go home and eat, pick weird unnamed bugs off my wall, party, and fangirl all over Naruto-kun! Yay! We're driving home now! I can't wait to get back to the internet! Anyway, sorry again for such a annoying review and sorry for using y'all for a outlet for boredom. (You know what they say. You don't do something you'll truely regret; it's just to be polite. Smirks and shruggs shoulders.) Anyway, ciao!

Yay! Chibi!Naruto-kun! Soooooo chuuutetttte!

Your writing is not shitty, and your story (at least this one since its the only one I've read so far) is something I look forward to when I get home from work. So please don't stop writing.

update when you can

Love this story the most! Can't wait for more please keep writing 3 XD

Hey, plz could u update this story! I luv it!

Well! This story has been lots of fun! I never thought I'd enjoy it as much as I actually did! :D

Really! The idea was just wonderful! Though the way you explained things at times were kinda confusing (only a little bit) and their WERE a few things I thought that could've been expressed more interestingly but besides that everything was simply brilliant! (My opinion).

But could you please tell me why (idk if I missed it or anything but..) you put a pronoun citation for LUKKI but not SEUNG? Or any other name? XD honestly! I had to read each name three times before I THOUGHT I had it right xD

It's cool though...

I honestly thought this story was done by now since it does seem like it's been updated recently... Plus it looks like it's been here for some time so I'm kinda disappointed that I'm gonna have to wait for the ending like everyone else now...

PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS! Do it for your fans! I'll give you a pet dragon egg if you do! D: ...or a cookie :/ LOL

I wish you could have finished this it was a really nice story.