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| The Glass Slipper 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseHeh. That was really cool. :D The language was lovely - absolutely flawless. I loved that "same come-hither stare of her peers" line, because the words sound so good together, and it's the perfect description. It definitely brought to mind those weird Nobodies, though I was totally expecting a Kairi or Namine drabble until the end. So woo! for a fresh, new idea. Nice work, hun! |
| rabid behemoth 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abuseOhmigosh. PLEASE tell me I'm right and that it's about a Nobody--a Dancer, specifically--just one of the zillions of enemies that Sora takes down during KH2. Because that would be so. Frickin'. Awesome. So...interesting!! @__@ Ooh, I feel all refreshed. It's not that often that you see such a drastically different approach taken to KH fanfiction. But it was definitely a breath of fresh air, examining a non-character like that. (Of course, all that assumes I'm right in thinking it's a Dancer. Which I hope I am, because otherwise I'm gonna feel pretty stupid...*sweats*) |
| TenkunoMeiou 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abusePerfecto! My love you have created another fine piece of work! -Italian kiss with the over dramatic hand gestures- And they aren't pretty when they dance, they are flat freaky >:O -UNHAPPY FACE!!- |
| Smoking Panda 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuse*curious* Is it about a dancer nobody? Very nice drabble. It's a cool idea too. |