Watermelon 2008-01-29 . chapter 1 Aw. |
55-Rue-Plumet 2007-04-02 . chapter 1The last two sentences made me shiver... Good job! |
GettingBy 2007-03-09 . chapter 1"When the weekend is over and Roger is back home in the city, gazing emptily out the window, he knows that he and Mark are staring at the same stars and moon."
That line, for me, was especially good. Reason being, I have pretty much that same philosophy. Looking at the moon is connection, because somewhere else, someone else may be looking at that very same moon. |
nycRENTgirl 2007-02-13 . chapter 1aww! the end is so sweet! and I love that you put "no day but today" in Mark's speech-- it's so perfect! and of course I love Roger's trance-like boredom and his realization at the end that he has been hearing Mark SING, and really really well! :) I love it!! |
Esplodin' Ookami 2007-02-11 . chapter 1I gigged insanely at "This, Roger can do."
It was very nice. A very interesting take on Mark and Roger's friendship. |
notEASYbeingGREEN 2007-02-11 . chapter 1this is really good. you're a great writer! |
Lady Taevyn 2007-02-10 . chapter 1Absolutely brilliant. |
Golden-Nightmare 2007-02-10 . chapter 1Huzzah for friendship and throwing candy at your best friend's pumpkin-head! Lol, This was sweet and I can relate to Roger so well... |
armageddon-incarnate 2007-02-10 . chapter 1Aw... that was cute. Good job! I really liked it! I thought it gave a really interesting view into Roger and Mark's relationship.
Great job!
Keep writing! |