Not bad. I like it. I like how you gave a timeline
"I officially sold out about two months ago, I started working for BuzzLine. It sucks, but it’s a paycheck.” It pretty much sums up the scene in "What You Own". I like how you said that it took Roger over 3,0 miles to realize that the loft was home. What bugs me though is, now that Mark makes enough to put food in the cupboard...wouldn't it be more expensive to eat out at the Life? ...just wondering...also did you get, Same ** Different Day from Stephen King? ..or am I completely off here? He uses that (SSDD) in Dreamcatchers. anyways, pretty good chemistry between the boys...are you going to keep this a one-shot? this is a pretty good start for continuing the story.