please update this. YOU CANT LEAVE IT HERE

It's wonderful. Except for the fact that I don't understand Sasuke's hesitance at telling her how he feels for her. I suppose, since it is only the start, we might find out later.

Awesome work!

Wow :)

I would greatly appreciate that you update this story! It has so much potential! :D

i truly enjoy alllll of your stories. I think you are a gifted writer and hope you upate your stories soon

I can already tell this will be a success.

I have read 'Shattered Minds' as well and have decided that I love your writing style.

Luv it! Fantastic job! The ending was sweet-

OMF*NG, I LOVED IT!

Please update soon; I REALLY want to see how this story turns out. It has been written very skillfully, with it's own originality and flare, giving it a touch that no spice ever could when added to the right dish!

It clearly outlines your talent as an author, seeing as many want to find out how their (Sasuke and Sakura) relationship slowly and steadily unfurls over time; not many authors have that sort of sway over me, and most of the time I find myself not really anticipating the next lot of chapters, only picking up on them if I find I am bored or have the spare time of day, seeing that they are there for my convenience.

No, your story has me wanting MORE!

PLEASE UPDATE SOONEST! XD

Kindest regards,

Sasukeluva 4eva

aw, howw sad:/

Its very good!

Woh!That was a cool chapy dudet!:)

ok this is weird

brilliantly written. I particularly liked the excellent use of body language, which provided thorough communication between sakura and the reader. In comparison to the first few chapters of your first story i had read, shattered minds, this one seems... more mature, organized and portrays sakura as a dependant little girl. I am very happy to see that your texts are free of grammatical mistakes along with concise presentation. Keep up the good work! I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter

vanessa

I hope you're going to update this...sometime :P

Awesome! it's really sad. Well I hope u update some time soon!

that was swet. im glad she lived because when the sheets were slipping i was like "oh shit! Sakura's gonna die!" but now im better.

haha