I really like all of your stories, I have read. Please update soon, so I can read, who is the creator and why here is doing all of this anyway?

WOW SO GOOD! Amazing job! It's obvious a lot of thought has been put into this story, and it really has paid off. Now I just got caught up (4 chapters in 1 sitting), but sometimes I find it hard to remember the little nuances you've embedded so perfectly, so forgive me if I ask a question that's already been answered.

First off, I LOVED the comparison of Intrigue to chess! VERY VERY GOOD! Perfect. Also, the humour in this story is GREAT!! Wolverine and the relationship between the three? It's perfect! And I don't know about you, but if I was a student watching two identical girls having a cat fight, I wouldn't be able to egg one on for very long, I'd get a headache trying to figure out which one I was cheering for! Lol

Ok, so we've established that Carrie is a clone, but she's working for the cause. And I have to ask, but do all the clones that have infiltrated the mansion actually know... well, who all the other clones are? Maybe I'm way too suspicious but something seems off about Charles Xavier... he said something about not liking outsiders, does that have any relevance? But then in the second last scene of Chap5, the clone wanted to confess to Xavier. I dunno, you're making this very hard to predict... and I love it ;P

And about that clone in question... sounded like Jean. She didn't have an accent, unless that was done just so it wouldn't give her away. Oh OH, could the fact that she said she was one of the first be because of her long-term memory loss as a clone? She just THINKS she's one of the originals?

Obviously there's going to be a huge moral battle going on, and I can't wait! Really good job! Update soon!

Nice story so far, hope you update it soon

Hmm, this is interesting. I just read all five chapters straight through. Is Jubilee one of the clones. It can be confusing when you don't know who is in the scene. Good writing! Keep it up!

That was rather confusing...I enjoyed it, but it raised amny more questions than my brain can handle with tests and assignments piling up in school right now...anyhow. Very nice, please update asap.

Darn ff. net!

Good chapter. :)

I like Carrie. :)

I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, how they are going to catch the clone or clones?

I'm avoiding letting my brain run in circles until I get more clues. I see no point in trying to wrack my brain for something that will be revealed...well...unless I'm reading a logic mystery, but I need clues to get conclusions. Please update soon.

Wow. I do so love reading your writing. I owuld love to have a larger glimpse into the women's past(s). I like how Logan and Jubes, the two most direct "sock it to 'em" memebers of the team, are the two that end up stuck with the subtle spy work. please update soon.

Clones infiltrating the Xavier mansion, eh? Sounds extremely scandalous! But what about Logan and Jubes? I guess they're okay to be trusted with the information, right? And even if they were the clones themselves, they'd have the originals' memories, so it wasn't intentional.

O, I can't wait for the tension to multiply! (teehee, sorry for the horrible pun, I couldn't help myself)

Gotta love that Logan, eh? ;)

Good start! Looking forward to more!

I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, how the sisters look for the clones and stop them with Jubilee's and Logan's help?

I like clones better than time lines, but the ywin aspect is always good!