Sounds like no one is truly happy, save Sena, but he's not there.

oh crap ambulance! and police!! fast!

Whoa, wait. WHAT happened to Sena?

oh i do wish that you update real soon, am really loving how this is turning out to be.

Great job! I love were this is going thus far. I'm so glad I'm able to read a Hiruma/Mamori fic, theres so much yaoi fics around that its nice to see this. Keep up the great work!

Oh brother, heh heh. This was just fun to read.
good job
Yue

Wah, finish it! It's great, keep going!

This is a great story so far. I like the style, the characterization and the honesty of it all. Good job!

Wow, this is really, really, well written - a real pleasure to read!
I guess I don't have anything to say that hasn't been said already; you've got an interesting plot, the characterization is great, the pace of the story is nice and slow...

I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Yay, it's up! :D:D:D
You already know my opinions so I shouldn't repeat myself...

*grin* Ah nuts, I'll go ahead anyway. I think you're doing a fantastic job of characterization and in writing the Eyeshield gang in a way they've never been written before.

Keep up the great work! *^_^*

All the best,
KL

PS. Thank you for your very kind acknowledgements-- it's a real pleasure to beta for you. *hug* ^__^

Yay! You updated :)
Keep going its really great. and a story like this is worth waiting for, :)
I couldn't remember who omosadake was But i think i can remember now :)
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I love this fic, its very beautifully written, I envy your style of writing, please update soon.
It really is great
:)
*HIRUMA is old :'(

is there more? Please say there's more...there needs to be more.

aka, i am really enjoying this. its an idea you dont see a lot in fic...the whole -much- older future thing. Its great.

Your writing is amazing, so eloquently discriptive and a great storyline. I really love this story so far. I just can't believe you don't have more reviews. I can't wait to see what's next. Thanks,

-Kelly

Lovely job! I agree with you that Miss Lynne is a fantastic beta and that her help goes a long way towards better product. She's my beta for another fandom as well. ~_^

I've loved this fic since the first chapter, it's so cool to see Mamori written from this perspective. Haha, I can almost picture her as an older lady with a slightly strange hair color and drooling into her microphone as she recalls the one night she had with Hiruma. I must admit, I'd be drooling too. I love Hiruma he's just my type; a badass with a heart of gold, well hidden of course. ~_^

Can't wait to see the next piece! Arigato for your hard work no da! ^-^