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Reviews for: A Foregone Conclusion
internalscars
2008-12-28 . chapter 1
Wow, that was a great fic! The "he"s weren't confusing at all, and it did make it interesting. Oh, and FINALLY I remember what the dad's name is! xD
Catastrophic.Composer.
2008-10-27 . chapter 1
i totally got this one and i loved it even more than the first one (; ahdroable
Laura Ferrari
2008-10-12 . chapter 1
Aww, how cute. I loved it! Adding to favorites
princetongirl
2007-09-22 . chapter 1
loved it update soon
Vampiresforlife
2007-02-14 . chapter 1
It was amazing. I loved it. I had kind of have been passing it over,then i recognized the penname,gave it a shot. It was really god.
Oasis Blackmore
2007-02-12 . chapter 1
Like it, definitely. It was a really great continuation thing; I loved Derek's cocky demeanor, hiding his uncertainty.

It has been ages since you posted anything, though I have to agree that school is a creativity-sucker. *sigh* Regardless, keep up the good work.

~ Oasis
JanetBanana
2007-02-12 . chapter 1
I just read the other fic first, and I really enjoyed it. I really enjoyed this one too. The POV of Dennis is almost that of any Dasey fan, in that they see it from the outside. I enjoyed that. Hmm. Keep writing! Because thats really good.

Derek nodded understandingly. “You’ve got nothing to worry about,” he promised, then reconsidered. “Pissing her off doesn’t count, right? Cause there’s no avoiding that,” he added. His expression said he rather liked it too much to avoid it anyway.

I laughed out loud at that line. It's so perfect.

Keep it up!
jannikajade
2007-02-12 . chapter 1
So i doubt this will suprise you, but i LOVED it.

I thought Derek was very, very IC. I loved Dennis's thoughts on Derek, and how he's known all along.

Favorite line: "Then, because of the protective look in the other man’s eyes, he added, “You know I’ll take care of her,” in a tone, while completely lacking in any sort of mushiness, that said it should have been a given."

I melted a little.

Too cute. Really. Nice work.
CheerfullyPessimistic
2007-02-11 . chapter 1
good oneshot. though i forgot "guess who's coming to conclusions" and still read this anyway.

the "hurt her, hurt you" talk is very common, and yes, i have seen these kinds of things in other sections but not in this one.

good job. the way u write so beautifully at 3 in the morning never ceases to amaze me.

~CheerfullyPessimistic
funnechick
2007-02-11 . chapter 1
I liked it, and I loved that Derek actually asked him and knew Casey so well that she wouldn't have it any other way. good job!
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe
2007-02-11 . chapter 1
O! Very interesting! I like how this came out! So wait...you haven't done a proposal fic yet? So are you gonna make one where Derek proposes to Casey, and mentions how he already got her father's approval? I would surely read it! Just consider!

~Chica~
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