that works! Good choice!

damned. i thought harry would betray them. story could be funnier that way.

That was a brilliant twist. I certainly wasn't expecting it to be different from the usual Harry joins Voldemort stories. But it worked rather well. Good job.

BRILLIANT! OMG! I absolutely love this! You are soooo talented! Keep it up!

I love fics like these! I wish there was more of them!

Excellent!

I really enjoyed this story, thanks for writing it.

When Moldyshorts sent Malfoy out of the room to look for Snape, did Malfoy get back in time to get hit with the dark magic eating spell, or did Malfoy escape justice yet again? It wasn't clear if when Harry saw the shadow/Snape who fired the spell- - -if Malfoy was back in the room again, or not. I sure hope so! I was so angry that JKR let the Malfoys escape justice, while she Killed off Dobby.

KUTGW,

Noreen

i like this story as well but i wonder if the "plan" was a plant and harry's betrayal was real?

Holy crap that was good

I didn't expect that XD

Too much "talking villain" and lesser faults.

But as an HP fanfic it still qualifies as a guilty pleasure.

sneaky

Aw, I really thought that Harry turned dark. I was a little disappointed in the end. I love dark Harry more than light Harry, sorry. :S

Great story. They took Voldemort down from the inside.

good

this is really really good! Very well written too, nice job!

Like every one of your stories, this was well writ.

Harry's betrayal is well reasoned, and justifiable. It does go against Harry's canon (and most of fanon) personality, but only a little. While I can see him telling the WW to get stuffed, I cannot see him joining his parent's murderer.

Snape is a sadistic bastard, and as I have ALWAYS thought, he is Voldemort's spy, not Dumbledore's. That only stands to reason. Dumbledore publicly outed him during Karkaroff's trial, so the only way he would not have been killed, as was Karkaroff, would be that he was under orders from Voldy to spy on Dumbledore.

Ron's reaction, and that of Hermione are very close to canon. Well done, without being overdone.

And so the secret is out. Snape is the instrument of execution, and Voldy is caught with his pants down. Like all the wizards, he overlooked the house-elves. After all, they're only slaves...except Dobby, who *really* should have been placed into Slytherin house.

Explanations follow, and we learn that Harry actually does have three brain cells rubbing together.

Speaking in a military fashion, it was a perfect setup. Voldemort clearly never read the 'Handbook of Rules for Evil Overlords'.

Altogether, a well told tale. My felicitations.

Alorkin