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| TheRaven619 2008-09-04 ch 7, | abuseLol i was listening to the beatles when i read this, but a different song! This was the biggest coincedince ever! |
| Leechlover36 2008-09-02 ch 2, | abuseFav author |
| Leechlover36 2008-09-02 ch 1, | abuse3rd time reading this story! i just can't get enough |
| Leechlover36 2008-08-25 ch 6, | abuse:) |
| Ghosthand27 2008-08-24 ch 11, | abuseHello, i love your stroy. i really liked the imagry and imagination you put into it. But what happens with kyle, and is gabe the one to kill her. i liked how in the last chapter you gave everyone there own time to talk in the book. I also read the extened sex chapters and thought they were descriptive. I hope you continue to write. i liked you stroy. signed, Ghosthand27. |
| Mary-La 2008-06-07 ch 11, | abuseAwesome story, but are you going to create a sequel? Please make a story about them getting pregnant and having pups!! lol.i wished it happened in this one, but thi story was amazing nonetheless...and what about Kyle? I cant wait till Gabe kills him! |
| deadmanbluff 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abusegreat story, |
| bookworm2009 2008-05-21 ch 11, | abusei love it! |
| GoddessOfLove-War-Light-Dar... 2008-05-07 ch 11, | abuseLove the story. Vivian and Gabriel are brilliant. Kyle is a excellent bad guy. The final battle between Gabriel and Kyle is going to be huge but dont write it to soon have a few more little fights and more words between then. Excellent Story |
| Wolf Spirit13 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abusemy friend told this story was great. and i can't wait to finish it. |
| emenem10 2008-03-26 ch 11, | abuseThat's GOOD! This is a great story and I can't wait to read the other one! Great job!! I really enjoyed they way you kept up the plot and you've twisted Viv and Gabe into characters that are almost your own. Kudos to you on this awesome story! Much Love, Emily |
| emenem10 2008-03-26 ch 2, | abuseAhh.. This all makes sense now! Great! Now I can get back to my reading! Much Love, Emily |
| emenem10 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseWow you know I was pretty sure that I had read and reviewed for the first two chapters of your story and was confused as to why you had gone back in time... I clicked on the wrong chapter of the wrong story! Whoops! So here's my first chapter review... whoops. ~Emily |
| emenem10 2008-03-26 ch 10, anon. | abuseI totally agree with RebelDiamond! He's deserves a 'pow!' Dynamic once again! Much Love, Emily |
| emenem10 2008-03-26 ch 8, anon. | abuseThat's all the pack needs is another screw up. Aw.. Poor Vivie. Wonderful chapter! Much Love, Emily |