That was cute. I loved the ending.

OMG! Of course Selphie would be the one to walk in on them. She's the one that would be least likely to keep it a secret! -giggles- funny how something so innocent turns out so dirty in the end, isn't it?

hehehe. loved it. although i wish you added when squall and rinoa joined the others and their reactions.

Very good, too bad its a oneshot. loved the part about Selphie catching them. would love it if another was made on this.

hey do you know i've only just realised that i actually havent reviewed your story lol so here it is! :)the story was how can i put it?? 'steamy' lol it was really good! and I wouldn't want to be them when they see selphie and the others lol.i can just guess that both of them will have red faces lol!
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This was Awesome, best SquallXRinoa I've read!

lol. tHat was awesome! Great job!

Haha, I don't read a lot of Squinoa but I liked this.^^

OMFG: I love your straight couples! Squall was perfect, (so was Riona as well)
Share your gift to MORE straight couples!
You ae inspiring me to wriet filth you wicked you!

pretty good, some grammer mistakes, but nothing major. very kinky :P

lol i like it nice job

haha i was laughing me ** off! I loved it! funneh funneh funneh stuff!

Thanks alot moment spoiler Humhp

lol! When Selphie came in I died laughing! LOL Very good story i love it!
*adds to fave story list* :-D I love this story!
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LOL! Very good! I love it! Great work!!So hot and funny!!LOL!!