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| Little Fish in a Big Pond 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseAw...how sweet...little Candy and his peaches!! :0) |
| Katharina-B 2007-02-13 ch 1, | abuseA nice idea. I remembered your other story where Ben meet a younger Candy, and I was happy to see you had written another Bonanza story. Of course it was predictable that Ben would take the boy in, but I liked how you mixed parts from the episode "Sense of Duty" with your own ideas. By the way, I always thought that "Candy" was short for "Canady". But we never learned his first name, right? I was just curious why you didn't used one. The only critique: I noticed that there are parts of the story where you couldn't decide wether to use "Candy" or "the boy", and it's mixed up, like this: "Candy boy appeared satisfied with the answer..." |