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Reviews For: His Better Half
Demongirl024 2007-07-25 . chapter 1
*just read Watching* Oh, if only Lucius knew..
RenieandtheMoo 2007-05-18 . chapter 1
Hate it? How could I possibly hate it? What do you mean, "not my best work"? I really must stop incessantly complimenting you. You'll get conceited. But anyway, the point is, if that's not your best, what is?
vratsababe 2007-04-21 . chapter 1
Oh my god. That was so sad!! I would have teared up if Justin Timberlake hadn't ruined the mood. (lol)
mimbulus-mimbletonia 2007-02-24 . chapter 1
Thats BitterSweet, and poor Draco's dead too :'(

Loved it though!
Gandalf -Dumbledore -Obi-Wan 2007-02-22 . chapter 1
First of all I want to thank you for your wondeful review on my story. It made me happy. :D Now onto your review...

I like it! Lots! I've read too many abusive-Lucius fics, and while I'm sure there were moments when the two didn't exactly get along, I get the feeling-- especially after reading Spinner's End in HBP-- that he and Narcissa really cared for each other. This fic captures that perfectly. Except she dies, which is sad. But I really like your writing style and depiction of his thought process... I think it's harder to write an implied extension of a character than the character's normal behavior, but you pulled of Family-Man Lucius beautifully. Now onto your other stories! :D
Peevesthepoltergeist 2007-02-12 . chapter 1
Don't say all that horrible stuff about your story at the end! It was good, thought I'm not a fan of tragedies. Only because I'm a sucker for happy endings! I would love to see a story in 1980; baby Draco stories are so sweet! And just be assured that'd I'd NEVER flame your stories... In silence or otherwise!
XOXOXO,
PtP
Mrs. Lucia Malfoy 2007-02-12 . chapter 1
No, I didn't hate it at all. Good story but...no Happy-End! How could you do that to him? *lies crying on the ground* ;-)

Looking forward to read your new somewhat long story of the Malfoy with their little Draco-baby. :-)

Lucia
bigred20 2007-02-11 . chapter 1
OMG no that was so sad i can't believe that. It was good just so sad i didn't see that coming. Lucius so has to find out that it's not true, Ok maybe not, but still WOW.
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