Aw, that was so sweet. Ignore horse that gallops. He/she doesn't seem to have a life. I think cake goes very well with Kyle because he's very organized and will show a soft side to others. I like cake myself, but I like cookies as well. The only crackers I like are original cheese its. I think I had a cookie cake once but if I hadn't, it sounds really good. The ending I think is my favorite because it shows future Style and it's a nice way to end. Keep up with these stories. I love Style fluff.

NPL

Just thought I'd give you a warning; there is a writer here who has been plagiarizing stories. They used to go by Pillar of Winter but now use This Account Does Not Exist as a screenname. Look up "A Very Special Arthur" and compare it to this thiefs "A very special Stan" and "A very special Data". They are word for word identical.
Be on guard for this person and please, pass on this message.

How serendipitous for you that I happened upon your story! You are about to receive one of my more creative flames, written from the copious amount of words which people suggested for my flame-writing challenge. After all, one can only use a copy-paste flame for so long before it becomes trite, right?

Right.

Now, before I crack my knuckles and begin, I certainly hope you don’t suffer from katagelophobia as I’m about to flame this disastrous fiasco you call a story, or from triskaidekaphobia as this sentence will end with the number 13.

I wish I could tell you that you didn’t have superfluous spelling errors or that your loathsome grammar didn’t make me cringe. I wish I could tell you that your plot wasn’t turbid and your characters banal. And I also wish I could work the word antidisestablishmentarianism into this flame….but, alas, I can’t do any of those things.

Now, perhaps there is an excuse for you posting this irredeemable excrement. Maybe you were drunk on a few strawberry daiquiris, or maybe you were even attacked by a bevy of flailing birds when you were younger, thus causing a permanent writing-related affliction. Or perhaps your computer was hijacked by a crank-addicted Sasquatch or a monkey whose loose sphincter and love of broccoli causes an aeruginous effluvium wherever he goes.

Whatever the excuse, it doesn’t make your story inscrutable to honest feedback like this:

I would rather attend a hoedown where inbred midgets caterwaul and perform fouettes while some guy named Jed plays the piano with an unmentionable body part than read any more of this pitiful abomination you call a story. I would rather be forced to participate in the domestication of rabid chupacabras than read one more sentence of your crap. I would even rather have an internship with Microsoft where I have to juxtapose logarithms for no reason and answer questions in pig-Latin about misconfigurations or network error messages all day.

I wish I could have faith that you will have an epiphany from this and produce a copasetic story, or that you’ll become obsequious to the fundamentals of the English language, but I think my left testicle will become a famous daredevil who competes in monster truck races before that happens. In other words: as a writer, you fail.

Best regards,
SouthParkFan1

I love this story, but now I'm incredibly hungry for something sweet D:

Aww, this was really cute!!

So cute, but so sad... :(

Are you ever going to update WNLB?

wo time to make me a cookie cake!!

it's cute...Kyle's such a cake person, always the neat and clean one. And then Stan likes cookies...

...if it were me...I'd go with..cake. Birthday cake, because the frosting tastes absolutely AWESOME

keep writing child.

-mana

Aw I really liked that! It was really creative how you led into the whole thing . . . the he likes cookies, I like cakes, she likes crackers. SO original, and SO gripping. The moment I read the first paragraph, I was sold.

This was a great way to start my Valentine's Day! You're awesome! :)

-Aub

Wendy has always disappointed me, because she's Stan's girlfriend and this gets in the way of my plans for Style.

HOWEVER! I like the way you wrote this. The idea of cookies vs. cakes and Stan eating the cake in front of Kyle, trying to make it SEEM like a cookie. That's incredibly sweet of him. And he gave him that smile, too. Aww.

And the idea of Kyle baking. Amagawd. /melt

Oh wow, this was INSANELY good.

I love your writing style, I can see everything as if it's happening right in front of me. I love all of the cookie/cake/cracking references, it's really cute.

Your description words in your writing are really good, and I really like Kyle calling Wendy "The Girlfriend". I think that's really funny! =D

From the beginning, I was thinking about a cookie cake after what you wrote about him thinking cakes and cookies are different. I love cookie cakes, and I was thinking that that would be a great thing for Kyle to give Stan. And you had him give it to him too! That's fantastic!

Please keep writing, I love it! Oh, and I was wondering if you were going to ever update Where No Leaf Blooms...?

Why do you keep bumping this every St. Valentine's Day? I'm sorry, but I have to think that your writing has improved at least a little in the past two years. Don't you want us to read something recent?

oh, unrequited love, how you hurt...
this story was too cute ^_^
and sad V.V
but good nonetheless XD

o.0 I'm at a lose for words. Simply, amazing. Keep up the good work.


-xxBloodAngelxx


Darn, now I want a cookie. Bye!

Cute very fluffy although I was said that it was a one-sided fic.

Aw:]I liked this story.So oober sweet and cute!Oh,And I guess I'm alot like Kyle.I'm a cake personx3
Wendy likes crackers?Bleh(No offence to cracker lovers).Oh,And happy valentines day!(Hugs you and everyone stares at me for hugging a complete stranger).