Ooh that was very well writtin (Chappie 5&6)^_^ I like the genjutsu that makes people all... Taiki..ish... Yeah Taikish! ^_^ *goes off to learn Genjutsu* Keep up the good work!

This is getting interesting. Update soon ^^ The ice thorns thing would hurt like hell though >< Ouch.

heh Hiroshi is cool ^^.This is a good story. If you tell me which Kage your looking for I can tell you the name. (Hokage, Mizukage, Kazekage, etc)

This is good. I like the Dad, he seems cool ^^ Does Suki use a lot of Ice jutsus? Cause those are cool.