Lol I agree with your final comment. I liked how it ended last chapter too. Oh well, either way this is nicely done. I enjoyed reading it.

No i hate how it ends ...*pouts* the story is great fantastic..but the ending sucks:P
why does sora have to get the sucky end of the straw he didnt even WANt to go? and cant riku go and get sora back...pwease i would hate it like this, you know, i would so be kicking roxas head in if i was sora...serisouly *bastard* though i guess its really sweet cos now axel and roxas are finaly together so...its fine :P this was really cool though it should be marked and axerox not sorrox :P nice work!

Well, I thought it was plenty concluded, but the last bit was totally appreciated.
:D SO Thank you. Really. That is all.

-chews on you- OMG ...LOL
You know my opinions already, you didn't have to give in the the whining...

oh and Roxas!muse is going to go poke Sora!muse till he gives in to teh sexeh now XD

you know you love me
~Leaf~

you're ending it like that? is that even the ending? so is sora okay? he isnt dead right?

im so confused...

Axel. Got it memorized? You'll be screaming it later... lol pretty good even though I don't really know kingdom hearts. I like the ending line obviously, but it didn't seem like much of a conclusion... you should add an epilogue or something... a short tidbit to the after...

*blink blink* Thats it? The end? What the hell? But...Why? I mean, come on! You could've made that better! And you could at least add another chapter, just for some closure! Wow, your really gonna end it like this? Really? Wow, I'm disappointed. I'm really disappointed. please, re-write this chapter, and re-post it, and more closure if you don't mind. Come on? What happens after Roxas wakes up?

You can do the exact same this for this chapter, just longer, better written, more details. Spend a good 2 hours, hell, maybe even a few days. Just make it something that you can be proud of and we can be extremely happy with! Please? Re-write and re-post this chapter.

hahahahahaha -huggles you- Yay you finished it! Though my Roxas in my head is Like "THAT'S NOT A GOOD ENDING!" XD
but hey...he'll deal...
~leaf~

*Cries* It's been so long!! Are you ever gonna update? Please? Please update? I want a new chapter damnit! XD So seriously, please update!

Whoo! New Year!! ^__^ New update? Please? I miss this fanfic, and re-reading the same chapters over and over makes me want you to update even more!! So please update? Please?

Ah, breaking my silence~
This is really good. :D I am enjoying it greatly.
I'll haunt this now, thank you.

yay more! more is good! make more more!

yay!! great chapter! i really loved it! i wish you wrote more though...anyway hope you update soon!

MUWAHSHSHSHSHSHAHAHAHA
yes i evily hissed.
You need to work on this some more -shifty eyes- like..and finish it...XD
~Leaf~

O_O OMG! WHOO HOO! You updated! You really truly updated! YAY!! *Is very very happy* holy crap! And you updated with another incredable chater!! This was...just really such a great chapter! XD Wow, I can't even type lol @_@

Wow, Just, wow. Please update soon! Pretty please? PLEASE!! 'Cause, there is a holiday coming up, and a 4 day weekend...I know I'm gonna update my fanfics...@_@I'm being selfish...XD Anyway, yeah, update when you can please!