Definitely agree with the other reviewers...your Ramirez is definitely mega-creepy. Good idea for a storyline.

Please take the time to finish some of these stories. You have a very vivid imagination and a talent for putting it into words.
Mag

this is a very good story pleez continue

i thought it was really good
sorry rameirez had to get away (gr)
i have a bad feeling that something big is going to happen
like steph will get realy mad, like she sometimes does, runs away, gets caught, then peeple have a hard time finding her
good luck
ive enjoyed it so far

i like, but i hope this isn't the end

Oh no he didn't!
One of the days I'm going to hit Morelli over the head... that is if he ever got off the page.

Keep up the good work...as always. XD

Your Ramirez is even creepier than the original!

Can't wait to see how Steph is gonna handle Ramirez. He certainly has her freaked. More soon please.

Stayce

ooH nice twist, I want more!

What do you mean, Ramirez is not dead? Don't leave us hanging too long, please :)

This is a great premise! Ramiriez is a wonderful choice for a bad guy ... creepy and dangerous. I can't wait to see where you take us on this adventure.

Stayce

Okay, I know it's not much but Rameriez is such a good creepy guy to write for! Enjoy!

P.S. I HAD to be the first to review my story!:D