that was cool... very moving... also very heart-wrenching... ot does have potential... but if you wanna keep it as it is... then awesome!!... it's great as it is... keep writing... later!!

Interesting! Nice one shots, although if you decided to continue into a bigger project that would be good.

The whole school journal things with Jake and Marco were the best IMO. I just thought those were the most creative.

Kudos to you for giving me a bit of inspiration for this dark remake of half the Animorphs series... I got livejournals set up as companions to go with the stories. :D Mostly you've given me some inspiration with the journaling stuff kinda.

I TOTALLY think this has potential for more! If you wanna be the mysterious kind of writer, the whole "assume what happens in the end" kind of thing, I respect that, but I would definitely keep reading if you decided to continue this fic. It's really well-written, and such a creative idea! Not only the plot itself, but the way you have it written with the journal/diary entries.

Wow, I can't believe what you're doing here. It's pretty brave, to say the least!

Better than the last chapter! (Though, I'm biased because Marco's my favorite...) I think he's a lot deeper than a lot of people realize. But anyways, good work!

Wow! That was amazing! I love the idea... and I'm glad I don't have to wait for an update to read the next chapter.

FIVE simple words: Recruit the parents and Jordan.

LOVE IT! Keep writing! For all things good! Kepp on writing!
love always
~Atlanta~

Update, and do something really weird like Melissa. Or David. Or Saddler!

Three simple words: Recruit the parents.

I hope you do continue it! But, sending them to therapy? It doesn't sound so good. You could always just make the teacher and parents collaborate on continuing to read the journals together without telling them. That way the reaction slows down while Marco and Jake open up more...I guess. They were really good one-shots though!

More! MORE!

You did a great job of planting the seeds that this could go somewhere, and I think you should bring in the harvest (Okay, wow. That was possibly the absolute LAMEST analogy I've ever used in my life).

Uh, anyhow. I love your writing and look forward to seeing an AA pop up in my inbox. I think this story has a lot of potential beyond the one shots (which by themselves are excellent!) and if you wanted to, you could definently take this places. :)

Happy Writing!
-Terenia-

hahahaha. as funny as the not creative version of the ending is, it would be better if you wrote more :)

I disagre with you, 'critic'. See, Cassie didn't put the whole truth into her diary, but Rachel did - or was close to. Cassie's father didn't know the whole truth, but Jordan knew a bigger part of it.

And... that's my point.

whoa! big trouble! BIG TROUBLE! cassie's diary read, rachel's--this is (quote of marco)INSANE! what have our dear animorphs gotten themselves into? i smell truble brewing!...or is that just my cat? anyways, update so i can se what jake has to say!