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| axjwritter 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseARGH! Why did you leave me in a cliffhanger! Also, I was disappointed when Aelita skipped a grade and Jeremy didn't. You should change that, otherwise Aelita and Jeremy will be separated after the school year ends and one-half of your story plot will be gone! Also, keep on writing! it has been 6 months!! Happy writing! |
| Malkmusian 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseGood high school story so far. Sad to hear about Kiwi. Hey? Where's Jimbo? |