  wickedvampress 2007-08-24 . chapter 1this was kinda funny. |
| Jason 2007-08-07 . chapter 1 Well written, although you really should consider finding an editor. I wouldn't mind. Anyway, I liked it as a whole, and I'd probably be better at critiqueng if I actually knew anything about Naruto. Other than the spelling, I can't think of anything to complain about. |
| Adam Hillcrest 2007-07-29 . chapter 1 I'm looking forward to where this might be heading... good break for a chapter. However, it makes me wonder where you got the idea. I always love to know the backstory behind any story! |
| ninja-freak13 2007-06-10 . chapter 1 cool! |
| Lanny9000990009 2007-06-08 . chapter 1 WOAH! most awesome story so far!
Please contuinue soon ! |
| Uzumaki-Hikari 2007-03-30 . chapter 1 uh-oh...can't wait to find out how they'll react when they're both sober...great story...I seriously can't wait to read more. |
| XxMadara's-Little-StalkerxX 2007-03-28 . chapter 1 GD! i love it ^.^ could you make a sequel where sakura and deidara have a kid? That would be gd ^.^ |
| Fujiwara Yuriko 2007-03-23 . chapter 1 *points a gun to you head* Update...hehehe... |
| LadySaphira 2007-03-21 . chapter 1 Woot! Great fic, keep up the good work! |
| Raccoon Thief 2007-03-10 . chapter 1 whats gonna happen next |
| galvanic 2007-02-22 . chapter 1 update! muhaha! or i shall send angry fangirls 2 you! >:) |
| Fairy Of Anime 2007-02-16 . chapter 1 Wow! That was short but good!! Pleases Pleases write more soon! |
| Bobalu 2007-02-12 . chapter 1 -Smile.- Interesting, to say the least. |
| xTomomi-Itachi's-Stalkerx 2007-02-12 . chapter 1 gd strat plz update asap |
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