Hmph...*ahem* this was *ah*...rather to say...short...yet...Interesting and amusing...

This would be interesting if you continued it.

this was kinda funny.

Well written, although you really should consider finding an editor. I wouldn't mind. Anyway, I liked it as a whole, and I'd probably be better at critiqueng if I actually knew anything about Naruto. Other than the spelling, I can't think of anything to complain about.

I'm looking forward to where this might be heading... good break for a chapter. However, it makes me wonder where you got the idea. I always love to know the backstory behind any story!

cool!

WOAH! most awesome story so far!

Please contuinue soon !

uh-oh...can't wait to find out how they'll react when they're both sober...great story...I seriously can't wait to read more.

GD! i love it . could you make a sequel where sakura and deidara have a kid? That would be gd .

*points a gun to you head* Update...hehehe...

Woot! Great fic, keep up the good work!

whats gonna happen next

update! muhaha! or i shall send angry fangirls 2 you! :)

Wow! That was short but good! Pleases Pleases write more soon!

-Smile.- Interesting, to say the least.