 PonyboySlashLover 2007-12-23 . chapter 1aw i think u should write a sequel!=) |
 princetongirl 2007-09-28 . chapter 1loved it update soon |
 tellmeifyou. 2007-08-30 . chapter 1Great job! I really, really, loved it! |
 BeautifulxxDisasterx 2007-08-01 . chapter 1I liked it.
--Lani |
 Newsiefreak172 2007-07-12 . chapter 1Ah, another amazing story. :):) You're a very writer. I really liked this one. I loved how he approached her and the thing about how things are better left unsaid. Great story. :):)
~Jordyn~ |
 elisa-fu 2007-04-27 . chapter 1great story! i just recently discovered your dasey stories and found them quite to my liking :) hopefully you'll write many, many more- cause they're really good |
 Jo 2007-04-20 . chapter 1 :O
That was awesome!
But I wish it wasn't a oneshot, it would make a grat chapter story.
Wonderful job. |
 Crimson and Chrome 42 2007-03-30 . chapter 1I liked that one as well. Good job. Cheers. |
 x14xERIKAx14x 2007-03-06 . chapter 1wow that was like totally awesome! I loved it! yay! lol well, i'm definately adding this story to my favourite story list. yah totally lol. Well, keep up the AWESOME work, and review ya later!! |
 Lindsey 2007-02-15 . chapter 1 Hey, who knew you were such a good writer? Both stories make me want to read more, so you have to keep writing.
~Lindsey~ |
 jannikajade 2007-02-12 . chapter 1Very nice.
I really enjoyed this. I thought you everyone's charaterization perfect.
excellent work. I'll look forward to more LwD stuff from you in the future. |
 Courtnaaay 2007-02-12 . chapter 1 wow, that was amazing Jimmy. you know, i never really pegged you for the creative writing type [which is kind of bad to be judgemental like that i guess] but you have a great way with words, and know just the right ones to use to express the mood of the situtation; i love when writers are good at painting the perfect picture for the story. i was just about to copy and paste an example of what im talking about, but then i realized id be highlighting almost all of it.
well, re-reading all this to collect my thoughts to write more, i realize that it all looks like im just trying to flatter you with compliments of your writing that might not even be true, but dont worry, they deffinately are. i totally look forward to reading more of your writing :]
-Courtnay |
 punkys.daughter 2007-02-12 . chapter 1it was awsome |
 argentenipinkini 2007-02-12 . chapter 1that was cute. i like how you rounded out the flashback so that it caught up to where you started. that was cool.
there were a couple mistakes, but i don't feel like listing them because over all the story was pretty good. :) i like how she kept interrogating him with her questions and i liked all of the examples of derek ruining casey's dates. hehe |
 Figurine 2007-02-12 . chapter 1I liked it! very sweet :) |