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C.H.E.A.R.
2007-03-20
ch 1,
abuseThat was great, I'm also a CaRWash fan.
Lilith
2007-02-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh, I loved this! I know you stole it from the original script, so it's all your falut if we didn't get this on screen. ;)
Great great work, luna, you're amazing.
fleeting.ideas
2007-02-14
ch 1,
abuse& she will be for a long time
as always, wonderful story :]
Smother
2007-02-12
ch 1,
abuseWow...I'm even more nervous after reading this. But this was really cool, despite how anxious it's making me.
But I read the TV description of next week's CSI and it still lists Adam Rodriguez as one of the cast...good sign?
ObessedTWFan
2007-02-12
ch 1,
abuseI know this may sound incrediby selfish but maybe just maybe this tragedy will bring Calleigh and Ryan together. Story was terrific and my heart felt like breaking for Calleigh and Ryan in their own way. Amazing.
Mad Lil' Me
2007-02-12
ch 1,
abuseYou may not think you can write total angst, but I do!! This is a great story,its as beautiful as always.

If we get as this much CaRWash in the episode, I think I'll be happy. We'd get a hug!
Dutchie15
2007-02-12
ch 1,
abuseYou added a part! But I don't mind. Well you know how much I love this story, cause I already told you that, and you should also know that I wish this would happen tonight. Love ya hun.
Moony's Lady
2007-02-12
ch 1,
abuseWow. So beautifully written, as always, and so believable... You put a tiny bit of romance it this, but without exaggerating... Too much fluff would have been kinda profane towards poor Eric. But of course you know how to do things at best every time.

And this was so Calleigh-like:

Calleigh did not move. She just kept rubbing the back of Eric’s hand in circles with her thumb, numb and motionless.
The doctor sighed, approaching the bed.
“Officer Duquesne…”
“I’m not leaving him.” She stated stiffly.

Great work, Luna.
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