this is so COOL! I've always wanted to see jaks dad back in action and praxis and erol and I can't wait to see more but until then I'll just have to re-read it all :D

too bad the metal heads didn't come back kor was one mean dude.

What's Ashlen going to do about her dad being locked up? It's not like she'd let him out but a scene where he tries to talk her into doing so and having like, internal conflict inside would be cool.

Oh and how's the Veger guy that got turned into an ottsel getting along?

You know what would be cool? If a bunch of baron's old crimson gaurds that are back alive tried to break praxis out or try to kill torn. that'd be exciting!

There were other people in the dark warrior program other than Jak right? What if some of them came back with freaky powers or something? they could be the next big bad.

This is an absolutely fantastic fic, and definitely one of the most original I've ever seen. But there has not been an update in so long! Are you not going to be updating again? :x I cannot go on until I see what happens with Jak and Damas! My head will explode. Please don't make my head explode.

LOLROTFLLMFAOBBQ!srsly, this is AWSOME!

also, very good reason to bring the people back to life.Balence; i think our world needs that, don't u think? anyways; i love the the other things u added as well like;RaHerz!yayz!and...oh! how is Jak gonna react when he sees Gol & Maia!? my god it sucks to be 'im, srsly!

later!

I have been enjoying your story very much now that I have found it, please do continue!

A most intriguing little crack baby you've spawned. I hope you update soon. :D

Oh man, two chapters in and I'm already insanely addicted. But I still have, what, another six to go?

Wow, I can't believe I hadn't read this yet! Well...actually, I can, I only just found it. Still, I'm kicking myself for not finding this sooner.
It's very well written and interesting already. Seems I've got a bit of catching up to do on it though...

I love this story, I really, truly do. Gol, Maia, and Kisa's part of the story is what has me most intrigued. I don't think I've ever read a Fiction where the dark sage is revived and not evil anymore.

The way you guys keep everyone in character is admirable too. I think thats the hardest part of writing someone else's character is keeping them how they are supposed to be, but Teh brainclones do not seem to have a problem getting inside their heads.

I look forward to the next chapter, and will squeal like a fangirl when I see it no doubt.

Damn, that was good. I mean, beyond awesome. I just started reading this, and I must say that it's fantastically written and a damn good idea.

Oh. Awesome! It’s great you finally updated.

Thank you so much.

It’s great to see that Jak, Damas, and everyone have reunited a last. I hope to see more from you in the future. What’s going to happen between Razor and Erol now that they’ve met again and what will be Herz reaction? Please keep up the fantastic work.

Happy 2008!,
RingWorks

...I wonder how Razer will react to this. Sad how I don't know these guys well enough to guess an answer I can positively agree with, but...anyway, your story continues to be awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter! Well, actually, I'm pretty good at waiting, but I'm sure you get the idea. I love this fic~

Also, Gol, Maia and Kisan continue to be my favorite part of the story. I wonder what'll happen to them next?

Huzzah! Absolutely wonderful chapter and a beautiful respite to the understandibly long wait. So many things are in motion and I can't wait to read the reactions. Hopefully fortune smiles upon all of you and the next chapter(s) come swift and easy!

Tension's building! Please update soon!

Yay for updates!
Scenes with Razer and Herz are ALWAYS cute, and Erol's surprise at having died twice already was undoutably funny in contrast to how pissed Jak was. I loved it.

Holy shit. Everyone is SO in character. I totally had a fangasm moment when I read in your dA journal that you updated. Dark Jak talking and having a clearer mind, with Erol noticing that is...wow. A effect of the Light, yes? Same with Jak being more self-confident and being proud. I like that. Character development FTW.

And with Erol being sane...nice. It's sorta creepy but it works.

The Acheron family...*whistles* I can't wait for them to meet Seem. That should be interesting to read about.

And as for Jak and Damas...curse that cliffhanger. But they're finally together so that makes me happy.

Looking forward to the next chapter!