M hm, I can see this happening much more easily than my mind actualy comprehending the horror of the possibility that Squall actually WANTS to stay with Rinoa. And Zell is harshly pushed out of the spotlight when she comes into the picture. It would be good if there were a sequel, preferably with Rinoa dying or leaving, never to return, or going insane... Anyway GOOD. Lots of nice metaphors.

Beautiful. Utterly beautiful story. It was so easy to envision everything happening the way you wrote it- it flowed perfectly. Great job.

This was a sad story but you can't end it like that can't you do more to it? I'd like u to! Please? Well if u dont I still think ur a great writer;)

...That was very touching...Nicely done.

oooooooo, i love this! it's going in my favorites!

Wow. This is beautiful. You've really captured Squall's attitude, and the last few lines are very powerful. Great job!

Now I'm feeling... sad. Poor Zell, I want him to know! See how the whole thing's about Squall feeling so bad, and I can only think of my poor Zelly?

I don't want to ask for a sequel, I like the ambiguos open ending to this, but I need to know... Will Squall and Zell be happy?

DG

God! You are one hell of a writer you know that! I envy you. Keep up the great stories.

I love those last two lines! They're so perfect! Poor Squall, though...

KYAAAAAAAAAAA! I LUV THIS STORY! YOU"RE SOOO GOOD WITH WORDS! This fic is sooo sweet. Squall seems soft and caring! Write more Zell/Squall fics! Grhhh...I hate Rinoa! I can't wait to read more of your writing! Keep up the good work(_)!

God that hit a spot...that was very touching. I loved the way you have with words. Squall's kiss in the end signified alot and helped to build up on the story line. Other than that I thought it was very kawaii! I'd like to hear more from you sooner or later! Maybe even a SEQUEL perhaphs?

Sorry for not being signed in...anyway, you've been playing video games WAAAY too much! But I like what those hours of play produce. I loved this! _

Ah! I thought it was Quistis at first, then realized it had to be a guy-Zell! That part about him rescuing Zell with the 2 guards, that was in the prison right? And Zell was all appreciative towards Squall and hugging him and stuff? And then Squall shrugged him off. That was so funny! I forgot all about that part!

That was awesome. I'm gonna go look in your author profile to see if you have any thing else.

Ha..I thought you were talking about Quistis at first, but when you talked about the ring & the hotdogs I was like "Wait a minute..." Heh...Good job! I don't really read this type of fic usually but I like it! _