This was so well written... it describes Bella's feelings perfectly. Great job! _

Jay (_() Marshmellow.

A very interesting concept, and one that's also very plausable. Nice job! :D

real good, interesting take on bella's thought as to why she said no. God, i sound so profesional...

well, it was emmett who had that happen to him, but i still liked it.

CmH

WOW! that was really good! and completely makes sense. it was really good! and maybe you can continue it. i would read it. :)