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| Hinodeh 2008-03-30 ch 1,  | abuseI love this story so much. Your Orihime is spot on and you are one of the few authors who manages to capture her crazy imagination. And the mental image of her and Ulquiorra as Bonnie and Clyde is just priceless. |
| selandora 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseyou really manage to get into orihime's head and sometimes this'd make me laugh, but other times (like the ending) it made me quite sad. it's impressive for such a short piece of writing to be able to bring out that kind of emotion so easily. well done. selandora |
| angelic.someone 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseYou captured Orihime's character very well, particularly her ramblings. |
| eyeshadowlady 2007-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou did a good job giving voice to Hime. I thought you did pretty well staying true to character, though I don't know that she really thinks so much of Ulqy (though he could come around sometime and I think it's possible that he might eventually defy Aizen and take a step away from the "loyal dog" role). I've started writing a story featuring her thoughts on Ulqy, I find it quite funny. But won't send me a notification email and it's been over a day *angerfied*. Anyway, overall you did a great job, and I liked the touch on the threesome and Ichigo being jealous, haha. Sorry I love that whole lesbian love triangle idea. :) |
| whereowhere-is-my-rabbit 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuse=O...wow...that was awesome! you captured Orihime's rambling tendencies perfectly and (somewhat scarily =D )you seem to be in tune with her logic - or lack of it =P it's a really great fic |
| incandescens 2007-02-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's brilliant. Really catches Orihime. |
| BlindWanderer 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI just love it. It's adorable and so Orihime. All I can say is that I love and it really in character. |
| snowleaf 2007-02-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really interesting style of portraying Orihime. At such dark times, she still retains her wacky imagination. Very enjoyable. It would be great if you would write more. |
| Beary 2007-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh...my... that was...*sniff* beautiful |