 Sakyh 2007-02-14 . chapter 1AW that was super sweet~~ like chocolate or something xD Anyways, that was awesome, and I especially loved the last part. The title could have been stronger (my teacher always tells me that the title is the most important part of a piece because it gives off the first impression) and the middle sorta dragged on alittle, but don't let that get to you! I urge you to write more! If you don't, I'll threaten you. GRAHH hahaha great job with this~!! |