I love the comparison and contrast of the two of them. Showing as two very different boys, with very similar actions in private. I really, really enjoyed it. Keep it up!

My english teacher made us do these Dominant Impression paragraphs at the beginning of the school year, which would give a reader a dominant impression (hence the name, lol) of who we were describing, without saying 'he was smart. He was brave.,' and as I was reading your story, I realized that's exactly what you were doing. The impression I recieved from both of your characters was probably the most vivid I've ever read. And I have to say, I was pleasantly surprised when I read this. After looking at the two negative reviews, I was a tad hesitant, but I'm glad I read it for myself. Wonderful job.

Wow, just wow! You captured the characters perfectly! I can only dream of achieving this level of writing. Brilliant!

i dont really like it much either...Sorry :-(

I don't like the arrogant and cruel Draco a lot, but I liked your description of him anyway - and the description of Cedric. I didn't like the plot a lot, though, it made the contrast between the two boys very clear, which I suppose was the purpose, but it didn't really touch/move me.

how very sweet of you darling! different, yes. but high-quality, as usual. 'he pulled out of the shuddering girl beneath him', Girl. hah. oh but i liked how they were both evaluated and weighed against. and the descriptions were perfect. 'not bothering to tie it', hott. happy valentine's day!

that was really interesting to read! like, during draco's description, i was like, yeah he's friggin hot. and then during cedric's which was completely different, i was like, damn, he's hot too! lol you really bring interest to all of your characters!

hmm it was okay. well okay actually it was good writing just not what i would typically read

AH! MY TWO FAVOURITE BOYS OF HOGWARTS! damn! i LOVE THEM. its SO HARD TO CHOOSE...but id choose ced anyday...hahah OMG who were the lucky ** laid by those sexes on sticks?