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ashley leann
2007-04-04
ch 5,
abusegood story, sad ending. but all in all i loved it.
anna42hmr
2007-03-19
ch 5,
abuseanother good chapter, definatly worth the wait
Bobcatgurlly
2007-03-19
ch 5,
abuseI really like the title of this chapter! Goes great with whats in it!
Is there going to be more? I hope I hope!
love forever
2007-03-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseits really good! when i was reading it i was saying jared instead of jorden though:( ive got some problems! really good!
RedRaiderHottie
2007-03-05
ch 4,
abusewonderful...glad they made up for the time being...and Patty ok with it all...very surprising...now we just have to wait and what happens next...please update as soon as you can
Bobcatgurlly
2007-03-03
ch 4,
abuseGreat update, they finally ummed again! hehe
Anyways...trust?? I hope they trust eachother soon so Kaelan can cross over!
I love this story, please update!
McLovin'
2007-03-03
ch 4,
abusei loved this chapter...they better trust each other becuase they belong together!
and what is going on with Kaelan? crossing over to what?
please update really soon!!
-Lia-
JADEDjessikuh.
2007-03-03
ch 4,
abuseso... totally M rated but i liked it soo they can get over it... lol... well keep writing... and hurry up
anna42hmr
2007-03-03
ch 4,
abuseanother fantastic chapter, keep it going
Tereza8472
2007-03-03
ch 4, anon.
abuseHey that was great... I am so pleased with how you are bringing them back together.. Some people may slam you for having them have sex again so soon in light of the situation but trust me it is entirely believable.. I was a teem mom and my son's father and I did this dance on more than one occasion over the past 13 years of his life... anyway.. Great Job...

I am sorry I havent finished my story I have been really very sick and in the hospital.. I will write the final chapter hopefully this weekend before I start a new story...
anna42hmr
2007-02-24
ch 3,
abuseanother fantastic chapter, cant wait to read the next chapter, fluffy is great
Bobcatgurlly
2007-02-23
ch 3,
abuseYEY!
They are getting back together, right?? hehe
update please!:)
JADEDjessikuh.
2007-02-23
ch 3,
abuseaw... keep going... love it... yea!
RedRaiderHottie
2007-02-22
ch 3,
abuseloved it...liked how you didn't have angela immediately forgiving jordan...anxious to read more
McLovin'
2007-02-22
ch 3,
abusei loved it!...it really does seem that jordan has changed
please don't take so long to update next time! lol

-Lia (echelongirl162)
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