Aw X3

oh, they can try to make puppies..rofl..

really cute

Ano...Ano...Anotoki...Ano...Ano...Man I wish I could end with that all the time, but it would create a bad impression on people who DON'T EVEN KNOW ME! Oh hell, anyway, this story was...creative...but slightly disturbing. Sorry. But nice, the endings are always nice. Though it may be a little weirdly put. But it doesn't suck.

aw, very cute and fluffy ^^ I loved it muchly. A story to be congradulated on.

Aww that was so sweet

Wow. I really loved that. It was awsome! ^_^ Cookies and pocky for you!

Aw. Cute much. But... what happens to Arcane? Does he go back to the pack or does he stay with Malik and Marik? Where does Malik's and Marik's relationship go? Why was Ashen so fixated on killing the weak members of his pack? You left a lot of questions unanswered and you definitely piqued curiosity. Do you think you could do a small side fic or a second chapter to answer some of these questions, clear some stuff up, and not leave a bunch of cliffhangers in one? Maybe? Either way, the story is as cute as heck. I'll be sure to read this one again later.