great awesome job, i loled thoughout the whole story my siter got fed up an told me to shut up.

very funny. it seems very clear to me that Chaxra is one of the most insane fan characters ever.

Gotta love random attacks...and zombies for that matter...
Your writing is golden. Update soon?
~numberVI

yah that rocked in a really strange and funny way keep writing please I love ya heaps and heaps!

uh theres dis awsome avatar by thr time you have finshed reading this you will have wat
sted 5 seconds of your life... heh she did an awsome kyo advice colum... sorry i wasn't at school today scratches head

YAYSES i want an army of cookie gophers and ice cream cows! Made by magic...im having a mad moment now yayses i no make Saix get rabis by a gopher bite and Xemnas gets mad cow disease and moos all the time THAT would be funny oh and i finally realized how to put stories up woop!...i didnt get it... anyho Ice cream ninja cows are the best feel their mooy and forsty power HYIA!

Ok i love this story its so funny great ideas and it sucks your stuck so im goin to help! the gopher queen shall help!! OK i can believe you havent even started on Marlys garden i mean make Chaxra destroy it! OR worse make her tick of Saix and lead him into the garden then destroy it! trust me is my less mad ideas the others involve a ninja cow and ice cream... ANYHOO pweze update!

Ok come to school tomorrow Dang it i have writen some fanficton specaily 4 you

cute!!

haha i love this! chaxra is so funny! i love how axel is like the practical joker of the group. very funny style, i hope you post more soon!

(sweatdrop) Chaxra is really weird...not you but the charactor

since when did you do fruits basket?

I read the first and second chapter, and GOOD GOD that is one blatant Mary Sue: the Annoyingly Cute type that gets away in situations that normally most definitely wouldn't.

Add some body to it(add paragraphs to describe a chapter, not all dialogue...) and give the plot a purpose, and it'll be better

LOL i don't think i ever laughed this hard before, update!I really like your style!

haha more brilliance...and toast. I love the pert where she woke axel up.