 aprimavista. 2007-04-06 . chapter 1Hey--remember me? Well, it's been awhile, but you've just reminded me why I adore your writing so much.
The detail in this was absolutely fabulous and heart-wrenching, and I can really see it being Kelsi & Jason. I don't know if I've ever mentioned that I love those two lines "I'm afraid of falling" / "I have wings," but I do. There were two times though when there was a minor slip-up and you used my & myself instead of his & himself, but other then that it was flawless.
I can't stop gushing, which I'm sure is annoying--but then again, maybe not, because who doesn't like to be praised shamelessly ? ;) I really hope one day you write a story like this and Hello Beautiful, but a little longer so I can enjoy your writing even more =) |