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devalexis727
2008-05-27 . chapter 1
Rawr >.< Why did you have to write 84 stories, I have to repeat Meh Likey over and over, Meh Likey though.
ready anf
2007-06-28 . chapter 1
If you ever use this again, count on me reading it.
It's amazing how you write. To be able to have so much emotion in few words.
You need to write more. :)
Have an amazing summer.
Love,
ready anf
StarWarsRules
2007-04-26 . chapter 1
WOW... Fantastic!
aprimavista.
2007-04-06 . chapter 1
Hey--remember me? Well, it's been awhile, but you've just reminded me why I adore your writing so much.

The detail in this was absolutely fabulous and heart-wrenching, and I can really see it being Kelsi & Jason. I don't know if I've ever mentioned that I love those two lines "I'm afraid of falling" / "I have wings," but I do. There were two times though when there was a minor slip-up and you used my & myself instead of his & himself, but other then that it was flawless.

I can't stop gushing, which I'm sure is annoying--but then again, maybe not, because who doesn't like to be praised shamelessly ? ;) I really hope one day you write a story like this and Hello Beautiful, but a little longer so I can enjoy your writing even more =)
Gandalf3213
2007-02-14 . chapter 1
Nice one, Finny. Except that now I have to go read that other story.
butterflygoodbye
2007-02-12 . chapter 1
Great oneshot! Aw, I think this is perfect for Kelsi and Jason. I really think it matches them. I can totally see him wearing Converse sneakers. Keep up the good work. Thanks! :)
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