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1eclecticreader
2009-11-02 . chapter 2
Thank you! Your story is an affirmation of why Lois and Clark are perfect for each other. The love they have has always filled me with hope. They're one of my favorite couples. You wrote them beautifully.
Erik'sTrueAngel
2009-07-30 . chapter 2
I hate Lana too and this was bloody fantastic! Love the jealous Lois... It's good to see her jealous for a change, instead of Clark.
TwilightBEL
2008-11-11 . chapter 2
WOW...again!

Lois having angry-ish sex with Superman. That was pretty steamy. LOL I loved how he teased her about the perfume. Not sure how smart that was of him though. Kinda hit a bit below the belt in my book. I know it was meant as good natured teasing, though.

I'm glad they talked about Richard. I'm glad she realizes how aweful it had to have been for him to see her with Richard all those years. Giggles on the pink panties -and the 'I LOVE YOU' post it note is SO Lois! LOL
TwilightBEL
2008-11-11 . chapter 1
OK, seriously, I was wondering how the heck you were going to pull that one off? I mean, why on earth would Lois be upset that she wasn't Clark's first valentine? They have to be around 60 at this point, or at least near to, right? When I read the summary I thought it would be a silly irrational piece of fluff...

WOW! You totaly pulled it off. I see how Lois could be jealous. She assumed she was his first everything and he was honest, or stupid, enough to correct her. Man, oh man, did he pull his butt out of the fire with those last lines he said to her. :melt: Lana was all he wanted in a woman before he discovered what it was he really wanted in a woman.

Correct me if I'm wrong but didn't Lois meet Lana? In Superman 3? He made her I diamond and everything, remember? I wonder what Lois would think of that? You do have the opportunity here for CH3, I think! LOL
xxClois-LuverXX
2008-08-30 . chapter 2
GREAT CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! I LOVED IT!
cassandrak
2008-07-04 . chapter 2
Great story! I liked jealous!Lois.
CharmedDestiny
2008-01-29 . chapter 2
That was beautiful... You had me completely captivated.
The emotions your words created brought tears to my eyes.

You are extreemly talented and I cannot wait to read more of your work.

Amazing job, karma.
Charmed*
DAGGERHOGGIT
2007-10-28 . chapter 1
YOUR STORY WOULD'VE BEEN GOOD IF YOU HADN'T WRITTEN ABOUT YOUR HATRED FOR A CHARACTER FROM A TV SHOW? YOUR PATHETIC
redeem
2007-06-07 . chapter 2
YES!

I am so excited to find out that I'm not the only one who holds a great amount of distaste for Lana Lang. This is great! I love how Lois is jealous...

Of course, in Smallville Lois has met Lana before, but the real version is just as good, or better.

Anyway, That was awesome! I love seeing lots of Clark and Lois fluff. ^^

-redeem-
jessica
2007-05-21 . chapter 2
question! the guy thats married to lois is jason the guy? or clark? man i love all your stories!
Jessica
2007-05-21 . chapter 1
aww lois is so cute! in this fic are you talking about the lois and clark from smallville or the movie? it was good.
Trekkie6
2007-04-25 . chapter 2
*melts again*

I love thir banter! So sweet and funny!

I watch Smallville too, though sometimes I wonder why, and I hate Lana too. Kristin does a horrible job; how'd she even get hired? *stops rant before it continues* Annette O'Toole's Lana in Superman I was much better.

*sigh* Lois and Clark. What will I ever do without these two?
Thanks for sharing their world with us.
Tee2007
2007-04-20 . chapter 2
could i expect any less from you...? nope! that rocked as usual...

Until Lois came on to Smallville i really couldn't figure out how Lois was right for Supes...you caught the essence of my character problem with Lois - all that time she was with Richard and it doesn't even occur to her that her Man of Steel suffered all those years? In the end, i see how Lois is the right choice for him - she does have many redeeming qualities, but Lana HAD her place...and now Smallville is getting annoying with the never meant to be Clana romance...although i have to be a little miffed at you if you're attacking my fellow Vancouverite, Kristen Kreuk, if it's just Lana - then i'm with you!

*sigh, mumbles* great job as usual...

*mumbles some more* Damn Alphie, she keeps writing all these great stories and i can't - how many ideas does she have anyways? hmph!
Christy Corr
2007-03-18 . chapter 2
Ha! I love Jealous!Lois! This was adorable! And Lana is indeed a green-eyed monster. Well done! *laughs*
Arhazivory
2007-03-16 . chapter 2
That was lovely. :)
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