I've only just discovered your story and I'm glad I did... it made my day I laughed so much and I'm still laughing as I'm writing this... and what a beautiful ending, what a brilliant idea you had there! Anyway, thank you and thanks to Moonstarer for putting you in her/his favourite author's list.

Luv your story and I read you profile and I live in toronto too!
High Five!

i love it!

"You have 'confusion and panic' written all over your face"

haha, best line in the whole story!

great job!

Thank you. I was in such a bad mood, but your fic has helped me feel better. I loved it.

lol, so funny ;)

This story is very cute and funny. I think you hit spot on how a guy would feel last minute shopping for a Valentine's Day gift. In the end though I would have expected Grissom to be more relieved than panicked. The XL underwear was funny! I can't even imagine how Sara would react to that! Great job! ; )

Aw, It's beautiful!

Great piece, I loved the entire thing. I laughed so much. Can I please add it to my C2 archive? If that's not okay mail me and I'll remove it straight away. Please keep writing.

Ths last line should have been, simply, "I love you."

haha! dude! XL! only grissom would be oblivious and panicky enough to forget to check the size. oh yeah. that made my day.

That is hysterical-poor Grissom! Only he would have Sara's chocolates get squished by Greg-the wrong size lingerie and roses misdelivered-and still "score"! Thanks for the smile!

Your story is charming. For once, instead of crying, I laughed all the way through it. Grissom just had one of those days.

Check your spelling--endeavor.
Also you wrote:
learned in for a kiss-and-titled his head.
You meant to write:
leaned in for a kiss-and-tilted his head.

Aw, Poor griss LOLOLOL i'm dying laughing here! thanks!

Cute cute story!

Cute! Cuter! Cutest!! I am sure you managed tu give a true picture of how GSR Valentine Day could look like. Confused Griss and his I-love-bugs Sara. I believe Griss couldn't get through the Valentine Day without a lot of luck - and you put it perfectly!