poor jo

omg fer once I acctually felt sry fer Jo. holy crap thats really sad. and thats also what I thought her school life was like. koolio

Aw. :( Dude, I thought Heath was different. I hope hedid turn into a vampire and was in the nest the guys killed in the first season. Bastard.

It is without a doubt good...and does seem to have potential...but bullying when prolonged like that can seem very tiresome. It had the opportunity of going to another path every new paragraph, every new section...but it didnt.

And when you're dealing with a storyline that isnt all that original, you dont wanna drag it because then people can actually see the similarities with other stories of such genre with so much ease.

This is the first story i've read so maybe i'd appreciate the characters more if i'd read more. Jo was okay...considering. But Heath seemed cool but then he said he was a vampire. That was the best part of the story. I didnt like how he didnt turn out not to be an actual vampire...but either way, i think its best you didnt leave the suspense just there and continued you're next story to realise that he's not. That would have been bad.

Its pretty good. Not that bad.
:)

That was really really sad...prolly cause I get the same thing from people at school who think I'm weird. Not that I believe in werewolves or anything *shifty eyes* anyway no matter how sad it was very good. Mad would totally agree on the Jo hate fest.

Creed

Wow. Whatta jerk. Great story!

Oh, man. She should have just drop kicked him right then and there. What a jerk.

Personally the only issue I have with Jo, is the constantly throwing herself at Dean. It's tiring, other than that I like her fine.

Good job.